Hello friends. It would seem there many poems floating around the this mind. I've been playing around with structure and using it as a device to create the rhythm of the poem. Here is one of the results of this experimentation.
Enough blah blah blah from me. Here is the poem
Chorus
Bent back to the sun.
Aching knees to the ground
Beckoning the heart to the gun
As twilight shatters a clement chorus
To benevolent sound
Expelled from empty lungs
Of muted sorrows bound
By the drowning sun
It's another layered piece full of emotions. I'm interested to see if what you pick up out of it is what I poured in. Let me know your thoughts vie the usual methods.
Take care of yourselves till next time.
Nic. Out.
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